Target audience feedback

We showed our opening sequence to our media class to get some general feedback on things that worked, things that didn't work and suggestions to improve.

• The shots chosen show that it was well planned
• Character is easy to relate to
• Music blends well and flowed. Worked well with shots
• The close cuts work well except from the door shot
• Computer screen is hard to read
• Could use message similar to mission impossible to parody it
• Non-diegetic text doesn't work should use all non-diegetic
• Open up studios is good with the opening door